Pop Ditty

[Intro – playful bounce, finger snaps, bright synth stabs]
(hey hey…)
(What I say…)
what you got?
let it drop…

[Verse 1 – light, self-aware tone]
I sat down thinking it would come so fast
A catchy little moment that would always last
But every shiny hook I tried to write
Felt a little empty in the morning light

Turns out simple isn’t always plain
Sometimes simple hides a deeper strain
You can’t just throw words in a pretty line
And call it something that will stand the test of time

[Pre-Chorus – building groove]
It’s not just rhythm, not just rhyme
(It’s what you mean between the lines)
And every note that you repeat
(Has to add a little heat)

[Refrain – as provided]
You can’t just write
(A pop ditty)
Who knows what’s right
(It ain’t pretty)
Gonna have to invite
(Insight)

[Bridge – stripped, reflective]
Can you see the light
(Light, light, light)

[Verse 2 – fuller instrumentation, more drive]
So I tore it down and started over slow
Let the silence show me what I didn’t know
Every weak idea had to fade away
Till something truer finally found a way

Now I’m listening closer than I did before
To what the silence is actually asking for
Not just catchy, not just light and free
But something that actually reflects me

[Pre-Chorus – rising intensity]
You can’t fake what wants to grow
(You can’t rush what needs to show)
Every line you try to force
(Has to find its own course)
… won’t force coarse

[Refrain – bigger, more layered vocals]
You can’t just write
(A pop ditty)
Who knows what’s right
(It ain’t pretty)
Gonna have to invite
(Insight)

[Bridge – stripped, reflective]
Can you see the light
(Light, light, light)
Not just shine, but insight
(inside the night)

Can you feel it right
(Write it right)
Something deeper in the bite
(of insight)

[Verse 3 – resolved, confident tone]
Now the melody is breathing on its own
Not just something I could build alone
It had to struggle, had to push through space
To find a more honest kind of place

It’s not about perfection anymore
It’s about what the feeling is for
And every note that finally lands
Feels like it understands

[Final Refrain – anthemic, celebratory]
You can’t just write
(A pop ditty)
Who knows what’s right
(It ain’t pretty)
Gonna have to invite
(Insight)

You can’t just play
(It that way)
You’ve got to say
(What you mean today)

You can’t just write
(A pop ditty)
You’ve got to feel
(What is real)

[Outro – soft fade, playful hum]
(light, light, light…)
(insight…)
(pop ditty…)
Sittin’ pretty

From the album Popped